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Thursday, June 08, 2006

Do you agree that it is the responsibility of richer nations to tackle global environmental problems?

Do you agree that it is the responsibility of richer nations to tackle global environmental problems?

Global environmental problems have been a great concern among countries. In order to tackle such problems, countries have to cooperate and come up with solutions to tackle them. As the saying goes, “pollution knows no boundaries”. This shows that it is not only the responsibility of richer nations to tackle global environmental problems. In fact, all nations that exist on this planet are to be involved in this issue, as we have got only one planet, one home. However, it is to be noted that in some areas, richer nations are able to take the lead and curb global environmental problems, as seen in the subsequent paragraphs.

It is rather absolute and biased to state that it is the sole responsibility of richer nations to tackle global environmental problems. In this case, richer nations only take a major share of responsibility in dealing with such problems. Richer nations have better financial resources, and hence more able to spend a considerable amount of money in controlling pollution within countries. With better financial resources, nations tend to hold greater power, and therefore having more say in global environmental issues. Richer nations also have the capability to provide poorer nations with necessary resources to help curb pollution within poorer countries, especially neighbouring ones, since pollution knows no boundaries. However, certain richer nations may argue that such an initiative by richer nations may adversely affect their economy. For example, the world’s largest carbon dioxide emitting nation, USA, has refused to ratify the Kyoto Protocol, which aims to cut down the amount of greenhouse gases emitted globally. USA defends its stand by stating that such a move may have a negative impact on its economy.

Again in this paragraph, we are able to notice the need for richer nations to take a large share of responsibility in dealing with global environmental problems. Industrialisation and the rising affluence have seen the rapidly burgeoning rich and middle classes owned a large number of cars. Since the majority of cars still work on fossil fuels, the amount of greenhouse gases they emit altogether is considerable. Given that the fact that industrialisation takes place mainly in richer nations and requires the burning of fossil fuels, it can be said that richer nations do contribute most of the air pollution and greenhouse gases around the world. In order to reduce such forms of pollution, richer nations must do something to negate the problems. One of which is to cut down in the amount of greenhouse gases emitted, as seen in the Kyoto Protocol. Another solution is to introduce more electric cars or hydrogen-fueled cars, which are more environmental friendly. However, critics from richer nations may rebuke that poorer nations also contribute a great deal to pollution of other forms, such as deforestation in the Amazon forest. However, they have to note that deforestation for timber and space for crops will ultimately benefit the richer nations, since they are the main importers of timber and food-based products. Without consumers, will there be deforestation? I doubt so.

However, there are other factors whereby actually both the richer and poorer nations should come hand in hand in dealing with global environmental problems. About 50% of the food market is dominated by poorer nations, since most of the poorer nations depend on agriculture to boost their revenue. Global environmental problems such as air and water pollution occurring in poorer nations may result in a decrease in yield and quality of crops. As a result, the exports of food-based products will be affected negatively, hence decreasing the revenue of agricultural-based nations, eventually seeing deterioration in their economy. In this case, both richer countries and poorer countries should do their parts to tackle pollution. Richer nations may introduce newer technology such as purification of water for crops, and also educate farmers in the importance of ensuring a clean environment for crops growth. At the same time, poorer nations should devise a system whereby food-based products are tested thoroughly for pollutants and toxins, before being exported overseas. And also, poorer nations should educate its own civilians on the importance of a pollution-free environment.

Poorer nations must also do its rightful part in tackling global environmental problems, since pollution knows no boundaries. Most of the poorer nations, in fact, are using conservative ways of energy production, such as burning of fossil fuels. This actually contributes to air pollution and greenhouse effect. What can be done actually is to learn from certain richer nations, such as Japan and Russia, whereby they use cleaner sources of energy, such as biogas, and nuclear energy. Here, critics may rebut that poorer nations do not have the resources and knowledge in importing technology and making use of them. Again, richer nations come in to play a role by imparting knowledge to them, and probably providing them with the necessary technology, with some trade incentives in return.

From above, we can see that both the richer and poorer nations should own the responsibility in tackling global problems. It is necessary to note that everyone must do his or her part, regardless of nationality, race or language, since we share a common home, Earth. Richer nations can introduce newer energy-saving technologies to poorer countries, along with the knowledge required. Education of the importance of saving our environment is crucial, especially in poorer nations, where illiteracy rate is high. Punishments can be meted out to those who damage the environment, and at the same time, incentives may be given to those who protect the environment. However, with all these, we are not really able to tackle global environmental problems, unless all the nations work hand in hand and consider the seriousness of the problems.

2 Comments:

At 5:51 AM, Blogger KOA said...

28-29 / 50

Things to note:

-Be short and simple. Sentence structure in some parts of the essay is awkward.

-Overall, the essay is relevant.

-Challenge the underlying assumption if possible. =)

 
At 5:53 AM, Blogger KOA said...

To get past 30 mark grade:

-Challenge the underlying assumption if possible.

-Be more fluent. Short and simple.

-Language-wise, try to improve.

 

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